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What type of figurative language?????help?!?!?

1)“On my way home, I would hike past row upon row of black barracks, watching mountains waver through the desert heat, with the sun trying to dry up my very blood…”
2)“I am what you call the black sheep in the family.”
3)“Afternoons I would see her coming from blocks away, heading home, her tiny figure [...]

What type of figurative language?????help?!?!?

1)“On my way home, I would hike past row upon row of black barracks, watching mountains waver through the desert heat, with the sun trying to dry up my very blood…”
2)“I am what you call the black sheep in the family.”
3)“Afternoons I would see her coming from blocks away, heading home, her tiny figure [...]

Is this poem any good????

I found some of my older poems…I am trying to compile a book together and in the beginning of the book I am going to have my early works…..its a book of poetry, and I just recovered this poem that I wrote when I was 10 years old, (Im 21 now)….is it book worthy? Keep [...]

would you buy or read my story?

here is what i got so far i hope it will let me do the whole thing!
The prairie Dog
Waaaaa, waaaaa. The sounds of the baby woke me from a light sleep. I had to get [...]

Who will kindly read and criticize some poetry for me?

Who will kindly read and criticize some poetry for me?
Ok, so I have to put together a poetry portfolio for school(I’m 14)
Would you mnd saying which ones are your favorites, and what you would change?
thanks!
1.
Free Verse Poem
If I could be a sight to see,
I would dwell in the city of lights,
And reach up to the [...]

Has anyone heard about Geordie Mackay? he was in the?

The Scottish Highland Light Inventory
known as the H.L.I. He wrote this song for his girlfriend
I thought you would like to hear it.
I’m Geordie MacKay of the H. L. I.*
I’m fond of the lassies and a drappie forbye
One day when out walking I chanced to see,
A bonnie wee lass wi’ a glint in her ee’
Says I [...]

Is anyone aware of the band Alcatrazz’s existence?

Has anyone heard of the band Alcatrazz? I think they are actually a decent band. Their first album was great (Except for Island in the Sun and General Hospital). And their second one wasn’t too bad either.
And who could forget Graham Bonnet’s shreiky vocals? Or Yngwie Malmsteen or Steve Vai’s killer shredding!?
While [...]

Is anyone aware of the band Alcatrazz’s existence?

Has anyone heard of the band Alcatrazz? I think they are actually a decent band. Their first album was great (Except for Island in the Sun and General Hospital). And their second one wasn’t too bad either.
And who could forget Graham Bonnet’s shreiky vocals? Or Yngwie Malmsteen or Steve Vai’s killer shredding!?
While [...]

Who will kindly read and criticize some poetry for me?

Who will kindly read and criticize some poetry for me?
Who will kindly read and criticize some poetry for me?
Ok, so I have to put together a poetry portfolio for school(I’m 14)
Would you mnd saying which ones are your favorites, and what you would change?
thanks!
1.
Free Verse Poem
If I could be a sight to see,
I would dwell [...]

what do u think….i am 16 plz read the first chapter of my juvenile fantasy novel?

1- talking to a lampost
Mr.Ismail wasn’t that kind of men you see walking around with his family in a supermarket or even sitting down with them watching tv..no he wasn’t that at all.
He was a mysterious man ..peculiar,with his black custome that holds a badge of blue octopus with a bold m around it,he had [...]