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what do u think….i am 16 plz read the first chapter of my juvenile fantasy novel?

1- talking to a lampost
Mr.Ismail wasn’t that kind of men you see walking around with his family in a supermarket or even sitting down with them watching tv..no he wasn’t that at all.
He was a mysterious man ..peculiar,with his black custome that holds a badge of blue octopus with a bold m around it,he had [...]

hi i am 16 yrs old juvenile fantasy writer and i wanted to have ur feedback i realy appreciate it …?

1- talking to a lampost
Mr.Ismail wasn’t that kind of men you see walking around with his family in a supermarket or even sitting down with them watching tv..no he wasn’t that at all.
He was a mysterious man ..peculiar,with his black custome that holds a badge of blue octopus with a bold m around it,he had [...]

hi i am 16 yrs old juvenile fantasy writer and i wanted to have ur feedback i realy appreciate it …?

1- talking to a lampost
Mr.Ismail wasn’t that kind of men you see walking around with his family in a supermarket or even sitting down with them watching tv..no he wasn’t that at all.
He was a mysterious man ..peculiar,with his black custome that holds a badge of blue octopus with a bold m around it,he had [...]

i need your feedback my juvenile fantasy novel…i am 16?

1- talking to a lampost
Mr.Ismail wasn’t that kind of men you see walking around with his family in a supermarket or even sitting down with them watching tv..no he wasn’t that at all.
He was a mysterious man ..peculiar,with his black custome that holds a badge of blue octopus with a bold m around it,he had [...]

Do you know the Ragman?

I saw a strange sight. I stumbled upon a story most strange, like nothing my life, my street sense, my sly tongue had ever prepared me for. Hush, child. Hush, now, and I will tell it to you.
Even before the dawn one Friday morning I noticed a young man, handsome and strong, walking the alleys [...]

What is the subject of this poem by Emily DIckinson?

I’ll tell you how the sun rose,–
A ribbon at a time.
The steeples swam in amethyst,
The news like squirrels ran.
The hills untied their bonnets,
The bobolinks begun.
Then I said softly to myself,
"That must have been the sun!"
But how he set, I know not.
There seemed a purple stile
Which little yellow boys and girls
Were climbing all the while
Till when [...]

The Perfect 1st Kiss?

Where would yours be?
Dont think im like a weirdo or anything but ive played alot of different scenes in my head where and when and all that if you know what i mean,
But i think the Perfect 1st Kiss for me would be Either Dropping a Girl off at her house while you are still [...]

care to pick your favorite/leaset favorite poems(s) for me? :)?

Hello I am trying to go through the poems I have written to select a few for my class. Any editing/critisizing would be appreciated!
Thank you
1.
The Forest Snow
Oh how the peaceful forest rests,
Under a spell, an enchantment of tunes,
As the trees creek softly back and forth,
And the mocking bird sings its sweet [...]

Are you a True country music fan? anwser these to find out?

here are some lyrics name the song and the artist with out googleing it!!!!
Im gonna light the bedroom candles take the phone out of the wall
we can lay around and talk for hours or maybe we wont talk at all
im gonna reserrect the love that slipped away from us and the man you;ve been missin [...]

Favourite poems, anyone?

A Day – Emily Dickinson
I’ll tell you how the sun rose,
A ribbon at a time.
The steeples swam in amethyst,
The news like squirrels ran.
The hills untied their bonnets,
The bobolinks begun.
Then I said softly to myself,
"That must have been the sun!"
……………………
But how he set, I know not.
There seemed a purple stile
Which little yellow boys and girls
Were climbing [...]